Me: This is embarrassing. Used the wrong "your", went to correct it, changed the wrong one, now I have TWO incorrect "yours."
Jack: So falls the mighty Oz. [pause] Oh my god.
Me: Hm?
Jack: Your character. He's the wizard Oz. Did you do that on purpose? He's the head of this whole magical society and he's The Wizard Oz.
Me: Definitely not intentional.
Jack: You should have a plot line where a Muggle gets stuck here, has to go on this journey and pair up with unlikely friends to reach the Minister to get it sorted out.
Me: Ha.
Jack: Work your way all the way to the top of this fantastical society, find out it's just more patriarchy.